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Character: Dax Blade

1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel.
2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon.
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
4. [X] They are physically strong.
5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color.(That depends on what form)
6. [ ] Their eyes are an unusual color.
7. [/] This eye color happens to be red. (Half, since his eyes are only red when Blade takes over.)
8. [X] Their eyes change color
9. [X] They have wings.
10.[X] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift. (He can turn into whatever he has been when dimension hopping.)
11.[ ] They are immortal.
12.[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13.[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
14.[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (Don’t hate me because I’m beautiful.)
15.[X] They are pyrokinetic/etc. (Yeah, firebending and his red ranger form is fire based in ability.)
16.[X] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc. (Spider sense, and minor telepathic communication.)
17.[/] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. (Morphers, but doesn’t really need them, half point.)
18.[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet. (He knows)
19.[X] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
20.[/] They are a healer. (Occasionally)
21.[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22.[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
23.[X] They have lost one/both of their parents. (Multiple realities suck sometimes)
24.[ ] They ran away from home.
25.[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
26.[/] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. (One set from a universe where Blade sent him on a bloodthirsty rampage.)
27.[X] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. (Again, multiple realities)
29.[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30.[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
31.[X] They have lots of friends/no friends.
32.[ ] They are emo.
33.[X] They look much younger/older than they really are.
35.[X] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
36.[ ] They have a mental disorder.
37.[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
38.[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
39.[ ] They are a psycho.
40.[X] They have multiple personalities. (Blade)
41.[X] They are very intelligent.
42.[ ] They have hallucinations.
43.[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
44.[X] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
45.[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
46.[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
48.[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
49.[X] Some part of their body glows.
50.[X] They have a rare/unusual name. (Made up my name, so yeah...)
51.[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
52.[ ] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
53.[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
54.[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
55.[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
56.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga.
65.[ ] They are very mysterious/dark.
66.[ ] They are very lively/happy.
67.[X] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
68.[ ] They are very patient.
69.[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70.[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear.
71.[ ] They have amnesia.
72.[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.
73.[X] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. (Will be seen in my story)
74.[/] They are 'the chosen one'. (A chosen one)
75.[ ] They have insomnia.
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements-

Points 20.5, i think

1. [ ] They smoke.
2. [ ] They are an alcoholic.
3. [ ] They are overweight.
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs.
5. [X] They have a short temper.
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [ ] They do not care much about others.
8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless.
9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.

-1 points


Total 19.5 points

Your point score:
5: Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15: Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW.

Man I am pushing it.
  • Listening to: sturf
  • Reading: my post
  • Watching: time
  • Playing: nothing
  • Eating: Air
  • Drinking: Coke
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As I slept, I had scenes play out in my head a little at a time, like fragmented memories. They were from my point of view, there were some of battles, some of conversations, and the very last one was Avenis Dinorital charging at me. I woke with a start, the marks on my hands glowing brightly. As soons as I saw the lights, they vanished, leaving only the marks themselves on my hands. I sat there wondering what those scenes were. Were they dreams, or was there more to it?
I put my thoughts aside as Seth came in, with the same expression as he had had when he had gone to bed last night. “Dax, did you see those flashes in your dreams last night to?” He asked with a mix of worry and intrigue.
“Yes, do you have any idea as to what the might be?” I replied, my tone the same as his.
“Maybe they were visions. My mark was glowing when I woke, meaning whatever magic was in the swords was at work, I think.” He said with his tone turning more to the side of intrigue.
“If we both saw them, Kyle and Lunesia must have seen them as well. They were in those visions, but there were two others in them with us I didn’t recognize.” I said thinking back to the visions.
“Whoever they are, we will meet them eventually. Right now we need to get ready for work before we wind up late and punished, because we will need to keep up appearances for now.” Seth said reasoning through our current situation.
“Sure, and good job thinking that through on your own Seth. It was impressive considering the normal plans you make on any given day.” I said, earning a punch in the arm.
“Let’s just get some breakfast and get out there, okay?” He said with a minor tone of agitation.
“Okay.” I say with a nod as we start getting ready. I made a decent sized breakfast for the two of us and finished the last little bit of preparation I needed to do.
As we exited the house, I sensed something watching me, probing my essence. I looked over toward the trees and saw two people hiding in the tree line. One was a girl, not to much older than I was, and the other was a guy, again not to far from my age. The girls was the first to start approaching, followed closely by her counterpart. I started to motion for them to go back and hide, but a guard spotted them and went to them with his weapon drawn.
“Stop,” He said as he neared, “state you business here.”
“Like hell asshole.” The girl remarked, “my business is my own.”
“I won’t tell you again, tell me what you are doing here or face my blade.” The guard said, annoyed at the girl.
This earned a smirk from the girl. “Is that supposed to be a threat? If you want a fight,” she pulled out a sword of her own, “I’ll give you one.”
A few more guards went to help with the girl, which made her smirk bigger. She took out three faster than the eye could see, leaving the other six in shock. At that moment every guard on the farm went to try to take her out. I saw a chance for me and Seth to get out of here, but I knew that we should try to help the girl out, Seth saw this as well. We ran in and grabbed our swords, unsheathing them and charged out at the large group of guards the surrounded the pair. We didn’t know how to fight, but our instincts took control. We were somehow actually fighting, our bodies knowing what to do while our minds were focused on helping the two strangers. After a few minutes all the guards laid dead at our feet.
“Dax, you know I could’ve handled that, right?” asked the girl, like I should have known this.
Hero's Journey part 3
Yay, action. I had some trouble working on this, but I finally got it done.
Nathan & Araya are owned by :iconnathanl9:
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As you all know, 7 days ago, Star Wars the Force Awakens came out in theaters. Today I went to watch it with my family, and not more than a few minutes into it, the IMAX projecter ****ed up and they couldn't fix it before the next showing. So I still haven't seen the bucking movie. This ****ing sucks Freeza's balls. I did still have a good day, it just ended crappily.
  • Listening to: sturf
  • Reading: my post
  • Watching: Kung Fu Panda 2
  • Playing: inFAMOUS
  • Eating: Air
  • Drinking: Coke
To all my friends on the site, I wish you all a Merry Christmas (or whatever you celebrate)
*Raises a mug of hot chocolate to you all.*
  • Listening to: sturf
  • Reading: my post
  • Watching: DBZ Abrogated
Character: Dax Blade

1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel.
2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon.
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
4. [X] They are physically strong.
5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color.(That depends on what form)
6. [ ] Their eyes are an unusual color.
7. [/] This eye color happens to be red. (Half, since his eyes are only red when Blade takes over.)
8. [X] Their eyes change color
9. [X] They have wings.
10.[X] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift. (He can turn into whatever he has been when dimension hopping.)
11.[ ] They are immortal.
12.[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13.[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
14.[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (Don’t hate me because I’m beautiful.)
15.[X] They are pyrokinetic/etc. (Yeah, firebending and his red ranger form is fire based in ability.)
16.[X] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc. (Spider sense, and minor telepathic communication.)
17.[/] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. (Morphers, but doesn’t really need them, half point.)
18.[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet. (He knows)
19.[X] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
20.[/] They are a healer. (Occasionally)
21.[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22.[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
23.[X] They have lost one/both of their parents. (Multiple realities suck sometimes)
24.[ ] They ran away from home.
25.[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
26.[/] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. (One set from a universe where Blade sent him on a bloodthirsty rampage.)
27.[X] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. (Again, multiple realities)
29.[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30.[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
31.[X] They have lots of friends/no friends.
32.[ ] They are emo.
33.[X] They look much younger/older than they really are.
35.[X] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
36.[ ] They have a mental disorder.
37.[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
38.[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
39.[ ] They are a psycho.
40.[X] They have multiple personalities. (Blade)
41.[X] They are very intelligent.
42.[ ] They have hallucinations.
43.[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
44.[X] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
45.[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
46.[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
48.[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
49.[X] Some part of their body glows.
50.[X] They have a rare/unusual name. (Made up my name, so yeah...)
51.[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
52.[ ] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
53.[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
54.[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
55.[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
56.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga.
65.[ ] They are very mysterious/dark.
66.[ ] They are very lively/happy.
67.[X] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
68.[ ] They are very patient.
69.[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70.[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear.
71.[ ] They have amnesia.
72.[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.
73.[X] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. (Will be seen in my story)
74.[/] They are 'the chosen one'. (A chosen one)
75.[ ] They have insomnia.
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements-

Points 20.5, i think

1. [ ] They smoke.
2. [ ] They are an alcoholic.
3. [ ] They are overweight.
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs.
5. [X] They have a short temper.
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [ ] They do not care much about others.
8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless.
9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.

-1 points


Total 19.5 points

Your point score:
5: Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15: Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW.

Man I am pushing it.
  • Listening to: sturf
  • Reading: my post
  • Watching: time
  • Playing: nothing
  • Eating: Air
  • Drinking: Coke

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