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Dark moments

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Hey everyone, I have had a dark mother's day today, as a senior at my high school lost his life in a car wreck. He was a friend of mine, and a fellow member of the Football team. I will not be disclosing his name for privacy reasons, but please keep him and his family in your thoughts and prayers.
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Mary sue test

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Character: Dax Blade

1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel.
2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon.
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
4. [X] They are physically strong.
5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color.(That depends on what form)
6. [ ] Their eyes are an unusual color.
7. [/] This eye color happens to be red. (Half, since his eyes are only red when Blade takes over.)
8. [X] Their eyes change color
9. [X] They have wings.
10.[X] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift. (He can turn into whatever he has been when dimension hopping.)
11.[ ] They are immortal.
12.[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13.[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
14.[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (Don’t hate me because I’m beautiful.)
15.[X] They are pyrokinetic/etc. (Yeah, firebending and his red ranger form is fire based in ability.)
16.[X] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc. (Spider sense, and minor telepathic communication.)
17.[/] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. (Morphers, but doesn’t really need them, half point.)
18.[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet. (He knows)
19.[X] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
20.[/] They are a healer. (Occasionally)
21.[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22.[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
23.[X] They have lost one/both of their parents. (Multiple realities suck sometimes)
24.[ ] They ran away from home.
25.[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
26.[/] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. (One set from a universe where Blade sent him on a bloodthirsty rampage.)
27.[X] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. (Again, multiple realities)
29.[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30.[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
31.[X] They have lots of friends/no friends.
32.[ ] They are emo.
33.[X] They look much younger/older than they really are.
35.[X] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
36.[ ] They have a mental disorder.
37.[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
38.[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
39.[ ] They are a psycho.
40.[X] They have multiple personalities. (Blade)
41.[X] They are very intelligent.
42.[ ] They have hallucinations.
43.[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
44.[X] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
45.[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
46.[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
48.[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
49.[X] Some part of their body glows.
50.[X] They have a rare/unusual name. (Made up my name, so yeah...)
51.[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
52.[ ] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
53.[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
54.[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
55.[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
56.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga.
65.[ ] They are very mysterious/dark.
66.[ ] They are very lively/happy.
67.[X] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
68.[ ] They are very patient.
69.[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70.[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear.
71.[ ] They have amnesia.
72.[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.
73.[X] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. (Will be seen in my story)
74.[/] They are 'the chosen one'. (A chosen one)
75.[ ] They have insomnia.
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements-

Points 20.5, i think

1. [ ] They smoke.
2. [ ] They are an alcoholic.
3. [ ] They are overweight.
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs.
5. [X] They have a short temper.
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [ ] They do not care much about others.
8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless.
9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.

-1 points


Total 19.5 points

Your point score:
5: Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15: Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW.

Man I am pushing it.
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As you all know, 7 days ago, Star Wars the Force Awakens came out in theaters. Today I went to watch it with my family, and not more than a few minutes into it, the IMAX projecter ****ed up and they couldn't fix it before the next showing. So I still haven't seen the bucking movie. This ****ing sucks Freeza's balls. I did still have a good day, it just ended crappily.
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Merry Christmas

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To all my friends on the site, I wish you all a Merry Christmas (or whatever you celebrate)
*Raises a mug of hot chocolate to you all.*
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